That's a really good game man, I woul'd like start my own game but i dont know the software you are using for the rendering? plz continu your work it's realy coo
Its' a good game. My only critique is the constant use of "Sis" within the conversations. It's overuse is not really needed. Once its established characters are brother and sister there's no need to continue to drive it home in nearly all the dialog.
I'm actually really surprised to be writing a comment on the game, type of that I've never played before and even didn't think about playing any of those.
It's not really about *adultness* of the game here, I believe. But the storyline is really impressive. Like, I mean there ain't much AAA games that really get me involved that much that I can spend hours without noticing that, but this one did. wow.
Ruby is such an innocent girl. So does Emma. Anna is a still a mystery for me as a person. Very interesting plot twists. Tbh I encountered this game by a huge coincidence and was pretty demotivated to play it due to not the best loading screen and scenes. But I gave it a shot, and didn't regret it.
Although animations lack here, so do the audio effects and other stuff, however you are given a choice that changes the story, which is great, in most significant ways (I hope it does coz I played it once for now) and that's really cool.
Idk man what you gonna do after this game, but the storytelling is really smth that thrilled me. This was a totally new experience for me. I got connected to the main characters somehow and starting noticing similarities with Sebastian and sometimes pretty common situations.
This NPC to player connection is the best thing that can be achieved in any game.
(although i don't play such games, like never ever. Most of the times AAA games like Witcher, Days Gone, Skyrim, Fallout etc. I liked it, it's dope.)
You should definitely give a chance to your storytelling skills in future. Perhaps in another genre. Maybe ...
I'm looking forward to next episodes. It's awesome, great job. Dfntly a deserved well-written novel.
Installed the game once, didn't like how it started and uninstalled. Heard many people saying positive things about this game, downloaded and tried again pushing past the intro. I'm glad I did. This game is really good and at times wholesome. I fell in love with Emma. It's great seeing her grow as a person! Keep up the good work!
Only feel a bit for the real Sebastian if i'm honest. Even if he was a dick, the MC did steal his life from him. But that's my only complaint (and can look past that).
Thank you very much for your honest opinion. This game was a learning experience for me, that's why the first chapters may not have the same quality as the last ones. I'm glad you gave it another chance.
First chapters are always a bit stiff (no pun intended) in AVNs, I've noticed. But you have the hints of creating great characters like Drifty, so keep it up.
Good storyline and great character interaction with the MC. Story seems like it is progressing well and the character arc is well written. Characters look very well constructed, but animation sequences need a more natural flow in the movement; just seems a little clunky, but overall is good.
Otherwise, this appears to be a very well thought out and well written novel that I can't wait for the finished product.
I would like to see Veronica in action next chapter, she's very hot, also Cindy had good potencial and has been maybe underestimated with no hot scenes about her, she's very beautiful as well, lovely girl, I would marry just her probably, perhaps later?
why there is no more activity in Discord and F95 since a long while, I can't even access to it, is there anything I did? How come? please, can you tell us what happened?
It is impossible to unlock all the scenes in a single run, as there are two important paths with their respective scenes (following the romantic route with Emma and being just friends). Anyway, if you use the chapter selector to start from the last chapter, it unlocks all the scenes of the previous chapters. However, the ideal is to play it twice, because although you will be able to see the scenes unlocking them with the chapter selector, there are many things that you will miss.
I feel like at a certain point the MC totally forgets that hes seducing his own daughter, whom he was kinda crappy to and never bothered to get to know. At the beginning he says he tried his best with his kids, but like, thats clearly a lie, he didnt try at all lol. Nobody seems to care that hes dead, which actually makes a lot of sense after you get to know his kids.
Maybe its weird but I kinda would have appreciated a real acknowledgment that he was an awful father and he did 10x as much for his kids when his life was on the line, which is really pretty selfish. But for some reason most MCs in AVNs are garbage human beings, so at least we get some context here. Overall, would recommend, an interesting idea for fantasy fulfillment
Its more realistic that the guy doesn't see the problem with how he treated her, as he was self centered and didn't see any flaws with the way he was living
I have a lot of great things to say, but there's one aspect of the game just just ruins my mood for it...
... It's not finished yet...
I wanna go on the date with Ruby, right fucking now, and finally take her in every sense of the word, and make her mine. God damn, why can't I find such a perfect girl like her... Ugh, it tore my heart out when it ended...
I do think there are some immersion QoL things in this one that make it just shy of perfection, but, just let them go, the high's more than make up for those pretty little squibbles. Don't stop Dev, and I hope there's more where this one came from!
First I want two thing one great game and secondly I am sorry I haven't been able to donate YET and while that's shitty on my part I still want say I will give some but I going though things I appreciate time love sweat and tears u put into such a great story
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Very good game! but I don't love Emma🙂
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That's a really good game man, I woul'd like start my own game but i dont know the software you are using for the rendering?
plz continu your work it's realy coo
Thanks! I'm using Daz Studio for the renders.
thx
Its' a good game. My only critique is the constant use of "Sis" within the conversations. It's overuse is not really needed. Once its established characters are brother and sister there's no need to continue to drive it home in nearly all the dialog.
Chapter 14 release date please!!!!!
Do you have Discord Group?
Sure, here it is : DISCORD
Does telling the fat daughter to lose the weight ever have her lose the weight?
I hope she does, your life depends on that!
When is the next one available?
i hope you make more beacuse it so fun and relaxing
Best VN ever played, even better than being a dik!
Thanks bud, I'm glad you liked it!
Please tag the downloads with platforms so that the itch.io app can download them.
Thanks for the heads up, I didn't realize that the pc version didn't have the tags.
I'm actually really surprised to be writing a comment on the game, type of that I've never played before and even didn't think about playing any of those.
It's not really about *adultness* of the game here, I believe. But the storyline is really impressive. Like, I mean there ain't much AAA games that really get me involved that much that I can spend hours without noticing that, but this one did. wow.
Ruby is such an innocent girl. So does Emma. Anna is a still a mystery for me as a person. Very interesting plot twists. Tbh I encountered this game by a huge coincidence and was pretty demotivated to play it due to not the best loading screen and scenes. But I gave it a shot, and didn't regret it.
Although animations lack here, so do the audio effects and other stuff, however you are given a choice that changes the story, which is great, in most significant ways (I hope it does coz I played it once for now) and that's really cool.
Idk man what you gonna do after this game, but the storytelling is really smth that thrilled me. This was a totally new experience for me. I got connected to the main characters somehow and starting noticing similarities with Sebastian and sometimes pretty common situations.
This NPC to player connection is the best thing that can be achieved in any game.
(although i don't play such games, like never ever. Most of the times AAA games like Witcher, Days Gone, Skyrim, Fallout etc. I liked it, it's dope.)
You should definitely give a chance to your storytelling skills in future. Perhaps in another genre. Maybe ...
I'm looking forward to next episodes. It's awesome, great job. Dfntly a deserved well-written novel.
Thank you very much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed the game.
Keep getting, Something went wrong or No Permissions when I try to download. I have tried 23 times so far. Any suggestions?
is there PREGNANCY content in this game??? I like adult games with optional pregnancy content.
Not yet, maybe in the future...
Installed the game once, didn't like how it started and uninstalled. Heard many people saying positive things about this game, downloaded and tried again pushing past the intro. I'm glad I did. This game is really good and at times wholesome. I fell in love with Emma. It's great seeing her grow as a person! Keep up the good work!
Only feel a bit for the real Sebastian if i'm honest. Even if he was a dick, the MC did steal his life from him. But that's my only complaint (and can look past that).
Thank you very much for your honest opinion. This game was a learning experience for me, that's why the first chapters may not have the same quality as the last ones. I'm glad you gave it another chance.
First chapters are always a bit stiff (no pun intended) in AVNs, I've noticed. But you have the hints of creating great characters like Drifty, so keep it up.
we want more!
Good storyline and great character interaction with the MC. Story seems like it is progressing well and the character arc is well written. Characters look very well constructed, but animation sequences need a more natural flow in the movement; just seems a little clunky, but overall is good.
Otherwise, this appears to be a very well thought out and well written novel that I can't wait for the finished product.
Good job.
Whew! great story so far! wonderful ladies ;) cant wait to see what happens with future chapters! totally worth supporting
The best game ive ever played i want next chapter haha
Why does this seem very reminiscent of something I read on an erotica page once?
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need update played the whole thing in 1 day want more options
HI @Zargon_games
Will there be a chapter 13? If yes, when will it come out?
Keep up the great work! ;)
Yeah, Chapter 13 will be released next week for my supporters and mid May will be out the public release.
Hi... So, can someone help me with one of the scenes? It's the one between Anna 2 and Ruby 3... I don't know where I mess up... Thanks in advance...
Story Spoilers
You have to break it off with Emma to get that scene.
Thanks mate...
Me and my friends need lots of Ruby f*ck scenes hahahaha 🤣 maybe you'll read my suggestions hahaha
There's going to be a lot of Ruby in chapter 13 :D
I already unlock all scenes from ch 1-12
Hey please release chapter 13 on Android I really need to finish the game 😅
Does this game include gloryhole?
Not by now
what happened?
What do you mean? I don't think anything has happened.
I just haven't seen any updates, I really enjoyed this game so I was worried you had abandoned it.
I would like to see Veronica in action next chapter, she's very hot, also Cindy had good potencial and has been maybe underestimated with no hot scenes about her, she's very beautiful as well, lovely girl, I would marry just her probably, perhaps later?
why there is no more activity in Discord and F95 since a long while, I can't even access to it, is there anything I did? How come? please, can you tell us what happened?
is there a code for all scenes unlock or something? I am missing 3 scenes in the gallery and not sure what they are.
It is impossible to unlock all the scenes in a single run, as there are two important paths with their respective scenes (following the romantic route with Emma and being just friends). Anyway, if you use the chapter selector to start from the last chapter, it unlocks all the scenes of the previous chapters. However, the ideal is to play it twice, because although you will be able to see the scenes unlocking them with the chapter selector, there are many things that you will miss.
Awesome i need more chapter please 🥺🙏
I feel like at a certain point the MC totally forgets that hes seducing his own daughter, whom he was kinda crappy to and never bothered to get to know. At the beginning he says he tried his best with his kids, but like, thats clearly a lie, he didnt try at all lol. Nobody seems to care that hes dead, which actually makes a lot of sense after you get to know his kids.
Maybe its weird but I kinda would have appreciated a real acknowledgment that he was an awful father and he did 10x as much for his kids when his life was on the line, which is really pretty selfish. But for some reason most MCs in AVNs are garbage human beings, so at least we get some context here. Overall, would recommend, an interesting idea for fantasy fulfillment
Its more realistic that the guy doesn't see the problem with how he treated her, as he was self centered and didn't see any flaws with the way he was living
Man i can't wait for the next update. The characters are so well written they almost feel real.
But damn if the last ending isn't a cliffhanger (and one of the routes you can take a massive adrenaline rush). hope we get more of this soon.
Especially more Emma, she's my favorite
I want more! Good game. Gracias por agregar español, es más cómodo.
I have a lot of great things to say, but there's one aspect of the game just just ruins my mood for it...
... It's not finished yet...
I wanna go on the date with Ruby, right fucking now, and finally take her in every sense of the word, and make her mine. God damn, why can't I find such a perfect girl like her... Ugh, it tore my heart out when it ended...
I do think there are some immersion QoL things in this one that make it just shy of perfection, but, just let them go, the high's more than make up for those pretty little squibbles. Don't stop Dev, and I hope there's more where this one came from!
First I want two thing one great game and secondly I am sorry I haven't been able to donate YET and while that's shitty on my part I still want say I will give some but I going though things I appreciate time love sweat and tears u put into such a great story