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i hope you make more beacuse it so fun and relaxing

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Best VN ever played, even better than being a dik!

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Thanks bud, I'm glad you liked it!

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Please tag the downloads with platforms so that the itch.io app can download them.

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Thanks for the heads up, I didn't realize that the pc version didn't have the tags.

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I'm actually really surprised to be writing a comment on the game, type of that I've never played before and even didn't think about playing any of those.

It's not really about *adultness* of the game here, I believe. But the storyline is really impressive. Like, I mean there ain't much AAA games that really get me involved that much that I can spend hours without noticing that, but this one did. wow.


Ruby is such an innocent girl. So does Emma. Anna is a still a mystery for me as a person. Very interesting plot twists. Tbh I encountered this game by a huge coincidence and was pretty demotivated to play it due to not the best loading screen and scenes. But I gave it a shot, and didn't regret it.

Although animations lack here, so do the audio effects and other stuff, however you are given a choice that changes the story, which is great, in most significant ways (I hope it does coz I played it once for now) and that's really cool.


Idk man what you gonna do after this game, but the storytelling is really smth that thrilled me. This was a totally new experience for me. I got connected to the main characters somehow and starting noticing similarities with Sebastian and sometimes pretty common situations.

This NPC to player connection is the best thing that can be achieved in any game.

(although i don't play such games, like never ever. Most of the times AAA games like Witcher, Days Gone, Skyrim, Fallout etc. I liked it, it's dope.)

You should definitely give a chance to your storytelling skills in future. Perhaps in another genre. Maybe ...

I'm looking forward to next episodes. It's awesome, great job. Dfntly a deserved well-written novel.

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Thank you very much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed the game.

Keep getting, Something went wrong or No Permissions when I try to download. I have tried 23 times so far. Any suggestions?

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is there PREGNANCY content in this game??? I like adult games with optional pregnancy content.

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Not yet, maybe in the future...

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Installed the game once, didn't like how it started and uninstalled. Heard many people saying positive things about this game, downloaded and tried again pushing past the intro. I'm glad I did. This game is really good and at times wholesome. I fell in love with Emma. It's great seeing her grow as a person! Keep up the good work!

Only feel a bit for the real Sebastian if i'm honest. Even if he was a dick, the MC did steal his life from him. But that's my only complaint (and can look past that).

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Thank you very much for your honest opinion. This game was a learning experience for me, that's why the first chapters may not have the same quality as the last ones. I'm glad you gave it another chance.

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First chapters are always a bit stiff (no pun intended) in AVNs, I've noticed.  But you have the hints of creating great characters like Drifty, so keep it up.

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we want more!

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Good storyline and great character interaction with the MC. Story seems like it is progressing well and the character arc is well written. Characters look very well constructed, but animation sequences need a more natural flow in the movement; just seems a little clunky, but overall is good.

Otherwise, this appears to be a very well thought out and well written novel that I can't wait for the finished product.

Good job.

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Whew! great story so far! wonderful ladies ;) cant wait to see what happens with future chapters! totally worth supporting 

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The best game ive ever played i want next chapter haha 

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Why does this seem very reminiscent of something I read on an erotica page once?

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need update played the whole thing in 1 day want more options 

HI @Zargon_games

Will there be  a chapter 13? If yes, when will it come out?

Keep up the great work! ;)

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Yeah, Chapter 13 will be released next week for my supporters and mid May will be out the public release.

Hi... So, can someone help me with one of the scenes? It's the one between Anna 2 and Ruby 3... I don't know where I mess up... Thanks in advance...

Story Spoilers


You have to break it off with Emma to get that scene. 

Thanks mate...

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Me and my friends need lots of Ruby f*ck scenes hahahaha 🤣 maybe you'll read my suggestions hahaha

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There's going to be a lot of Ruby in chapter 13 :D

I already unlock all scenes from ch 1-12

Hey please release chapter 13 on Android I really need to finish the game 😅

Does this game include gloryhole?

Not by now

what happened?

What do you mean? I don't think anything has happened.

I just haven't seen any updates, I really enjoyed this game so I was worried you had abandoned it.

I would like to see Veronica in action next chapter, she's very hot,  also Cindy had good potencial and has been maybe underestimated with no hot scenes about her, she's very beautiful as well, lovely girl, I would marry just her probably, perhaps later?

why there is no more activity in Discord and F95 since a long while, I can't even access to it, is there anything I did? How come? please, can you tell us what happened?

is there a code for all scenes unlock or something? I am missing 3 scenes in the gallery and not sure what they are.

It is impossible to unlock all the scenes in a single run, as there are two important paths with their respective scenes (following the romantic route with Emma and being just friends). Anyway, if you use the chapter selector to start from the last chapter, it unlocks all the scenes of the previous chapters. However, the ideal is to play it twice, because although you will be able to see the scenes unlocking them with the chapter selector, there are many things that you will miss.

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Awesome i need more chapter please 🥺🙏

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I feel like at a certain point the MC totally forgets that hes seducing his own daughter, whom he was kinda crappy to and never bothered to get to know. At the beginning he says he tried his best with his kids, but like, thats clearly a lie, he didnt try at all lol. Nobody seems to care that hes dead, which actually makes a lot of sense after you get to know his kids.


Maybe its weird but I kinda would have appreciated a real acknowledgment that he was an awful father and he did 10x as much for his kids when his life was on the line, which is really pretty selfish. But for some reason most MCs in AVNs are garbage human beings, so at least we get some context here. Overall, would recommend, an interesting idea for fantasy fulfillment

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Its more realistic that the guy doesn't see the problem with how he treated her, as he was self centered and didn't see any flaws with the way he was living

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Man i can't wait for the next update. The characters are so well written they almost feel real.

But damn if the last ending isn't a cliffhanger (and one of the routes you can take a massive adrenaline rush). hope we get more of this soon.

Especially more Emma, she's my favorite

I want more! Good game. Gracias por agregar español, es más cómodo.

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I have a lot of great things to say, but there's one aspect of the game just just ruins my mood for it...


... It's not finished yet...


I wanna go on the date with Ruby, right fucking now, and finally take her in every sense of the word, and make her mine. God damn, why can't I find such a perfect girl like her... Ugh, it tore my heart out when it ended...

I do think there are some immersion QoL things in this one that make it just shy of perfection, but, just let them go, the high's more than make up for those pretty little squibbles. Don't stop Dev, and I hope there's more where this one came from!

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First I want two thing one great game and secondly I am sorry I haven't been able to donate YET and while that's shitty on my part I still want say I will give some but I going though things I appreciate time love sweat and tears u put into such a great story

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Looking forward to seeing Emma fatter than ever, with a big pregnant belly.

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bro wtf??

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Right, make them all pregnant.

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weird

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Exactly

Oh I just replied to early access, do update here if you ever release anything on steam and if it's in budget, will try to support.

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There will be translation to Spanish, so that all users can enjoy it???

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Hola Rayo, el juego está totalmente traducido al español, solo debes clickear en "preferences" del menu principal y cambiar el idioma.

Absolutely loving the game so far. Hoping for more action with Anna, can't wait for the next part to come out!

Any updates on when to expect it?

Keep up the wonderful work!

So, I've played this through twice (once with a walkthrough), but I still have a gallery item locked and can't figure out how to get it. It's between "Anna2" and "Ruby3".

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You need to reject the romantic relationship with Emma, that way the sleepover would be with Ruby and Zoe , that's a pretty hot scene you missed.

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I wanted to thank you so much for this novel, really. I'd like, though, to give a honest review, with my admiration, but also with a few complains, which ones weren't enough to not let me embrace this journey.

First of all, I loved the concept of a "loser" restarting his life and getting to remake his choices, to live a better life. I miss some psychological problems in his attitude, normally it's hard to leave all the bad habits from the past, but, at the same time, not having this deepness made the story more wholesome and light. But I'll as explanation the fact that he changed his body, hence losing all his neural paths that lead to the old habits, albeit it means he also would face the emotional habits of the current body.

About Emma, I think MC is pretty stupid. I understand him not having bad thoughts about dating the mother or the sister of his current new life, as he doesn't have the memories, but Emma was his daughter for so many years. Even if he was a pretty distant father, he still saw her throughout life. It's strange for him to accept to see her like a potential date without any thought. In this regard, his current sister and mother are more developed, as they suffer from dilemmas and need some time to re-evaluate the relationship, to reinterpratate the memories build for so many years as a normal family. I really missed some inner hardships on his side to date her. 

Fortunately, your game is great and I don't have other complains. The scenes were awesome. In the path I took, I lost a lot of images, didn't go deep in Zoe Route, rejected the principal, and didn't pursue Emma romantic side, and didn't harass the girls while sleeping. However, the story was good enough to make me full immersed for hours, even without those extra scenes. I loved how the MC is dealing with Lucas problems (this storyline is very interesting). I loved your boldness to make the game more mature by making the characters be targeted by men in a dark realistic and non kinky way. I certainly grew myself facing my feelings about the mom's coworker, and I was very thankful for not having cheating or NTR. I also loved how the somewhat little harem of the sister and Emma was being formed, how competition was being portraited. By the way, I found great how you described the emotions of the female characters.

The relationship development with the Sister was great, tbh. It's very lovely and wholesome, and sexy in the right proportions (although it's getting a little out of control haha, but it's a porn game after all). It'd be nice to have a path to get into a relationship solely with her, though, at least I couldn't run away from Zoe, not that I complain, it was kinky. The important, though, is that it made my heart very warm, and I hope in future versions I'll get to fulfill my heart desire to make the Sister (that I forgot the name) feel cared, loved, special and unique (wrong kind of game to seek it, maybe?). 


In real life, your story inspired me to seek to change my behavior, not to get girls, but to live wholesome moments with people, to feel in a more important way to others. I don't work and don't plan to work until finishing university, but seeing how the protagonist was able to support so many people by helping economically, it makes me want to use my efforts to support the close friends and family somehow, not necessarily through job. 

Your story also game me some quotes and lessons. About the latter, the possible change after an accident kept me thinking. Death can be so close to us, experiencing the one the MC dealt with made me realize it more, the regrets I'd have. Moreover, just as the MC is making efforts to help his prior family, it made me wonder the efforts my family had to with me, from education to money. Things like that we always know, but until we experiencing it, we can't form a proper feeling, just like death: we know we are only temporarily here, but we only create a deep understand of what is means when we experience it with our senses and feelings. 

About the quotes, I wrote them in my language, so Idk em exactly, but I loved one that goes like "it's better to be in the beginning of the right stair than in the middle of the wrong one", so many times it requires courage to give up on something unfruitous to invest in something right that we still don't have any progress. And we can feel it's too late. But it's better to start late than to keep going on the wrong stair, like you appointed. I also enjoyed something the mother said when confronted about lewd stuff with the MC "there are things we shouldn't rationalize". It doesn't apply only to Moral (although it has a great application in this field), but also goes to our little decisions that, if we think and rationalize, we will see only possible troubles, fears and insecurities that will hold us back. Sometimes, rationalizing certain things only make everything worse, from morality to decisions. Deep inside us, after all, we know what we will regret or not if we faced death, this voice that we try to shuffle to satisfy our egoistical desires never goes away completely. Furthermore, the mother was very firm on doing the right thing in spite of what she was feeling, it works great with the non over-rationalize mindset (ps: there are always things worth of over-rationalizing, but certainly some are not).

I liked the MC personality, it felt pretty much of what I'd feel in his shoes, with exception about Emma. I admired how you didn't make the cliché of characters questioning whether if it's the real MC, but made his personality change be something natural with the accident. It was enjoyable to see him being very smart in the beginning to not call people wrongly, to study more the relationships and to have the skill to create good excuses to his memory ahd changes. 

It was so refreshing to see MC getting his fruits for building a passionate relationship with people, to see him satisfied for having changed and creating a better life for himself, without, of course, not missing the pleasures of the youth body.

It was nice to see almost all the fetishes could be evaded without much loss, with exception of Veronica, from what I've seen. It made me feel respected.

But seriously, the graphics was very nice, and it was so hot seeing how things were slowly evolving with the main female characters, little by little. Every character was also unique and they didn't seem, imo, stereotypes.

I'm impressed about the quality of the game in spite of it being free. I've seen utter garbage these days while trying to find something to fulfill my horniness and my heart at the same time (double stonks), and your game was very unique above everything. I'm generally very bothered about incest, but, on the contrary this time, the situation of the protagonist made me evaluate differently the morality of the connections being formed. He doesn't have memories and he acts like an adult, understandable he chasing his 2 beautiful family relatives. It must be sad, though, to not be able to know the dilemmas they are facing in their head and heart because he has no memory of the past. 

Btw, don't change anything just because of pressure of mine, please. If I gave you any worthy idea, only apply it if it resonates with what you want for your game, as I'm just one player. I was very touched and learned a lot with the novel, but there are others experiencing things as well, and each one has a different taste and life experience that change how one perceives the story. 

If I were economically independent, I'd certainly support your game. But, not being able to do it, I hope I could help somehow with this comment. 

If you need any opinion or review on a specific thing, it'd be a pleasure for me to help you on that.

Wishing you all the luck in your life.

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Thank you very much for this very extensive and detailed review. I'm glad you found more than just the sexy part of the game, and if any of the phrases or teachings of the game have helped to improve your life even a little bit, that's the greatest satisfaction I can get.

A while ago, another player had told me that the cemetery part had made him cry, literally, tears in his eyes! I really had no idea the impact it could have on other people from my role as a developer. However, his comment was thanking me, because despite the sad moment, he really enjoyed the story.

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I have some fun in here but it's like most of the worthwhile girls are background.  Great sister, but otherwise it's Veronika, Cindy, and the Gangster's Daughter.  Barely get them while moms, fat girls, and old ladies seem implemented, was so happy to end those options, but so much wasted time trying to avoid them and get back to the attractive girls.

So, I downloaded the newest update, but I don't understand how I can use my previous saves. Every time I try to load a previous save it throws up an Exception error. Then if I say Ignore it just starts from the very beginning...

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Saves from chapter 10 should work fine, but if you save is older it is very likely that my modifications have broken it, I apologize for that. Anyway I have put an index so you can start from wherever you want and you don't have to start all over again.

Well, my latest save (choice between "Let lust take over" or "Resist temptation" when looking at sister) doesn't work.
But thankfully I save often so found another recent save that worked.   👍

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